Score: 6

"Problems found with game:"

submission: ZombieTypocalpyse

date: September 11, 2008

When zombies are grouped close together, the text of one zombie will overlap the other making one impossible to read. This also happens with the appearing items at the left side of the screen when they pile up. In one instance nearing the later levels, they got close to me, and one zombie moved to the far left of the screen and I couldn't read the first half of the word bubble because it was cut off of the screen.

The one time I died, and clicked 'try again', and restarted the same level, I suddenly didn't have the 'bigger guns' that I had been saving up, which I found a little unfair.

Other than the problems listed above, this was a great game. The animation was simple, and actually was not all that violent. I found no problem with the choice of words (though I only played the easy difficulty), although I'm sure some would object to "anal leakage". The only reason I bring up these two points is because I believe that this would be an appropriate game for teaching typing in school. It's alot more fun than the teaches typing games I played involving racing a rowboat, where typing faster makes the character row faster.

Score: 6

"I see your point"

submission: How to write good reviews

date: September 6, 2008

...and voted higher because of your point. Lets see if I learned anything...

I liked the audio, it was not anything great, but it wasn't annoying either. It was a good idea to lable this as a game so that the viewer could reat the text at their own pace (some people read slower than others), and I agree that a review shouldn't just be the opinion of "this is awesome" or "this is B.S." I also liked how you showed writen reviews from other submissions (why is this helpful/usless/abusive), whether they were writen by yourself just as examples, or were other actual reviews.

My reasons for not voting 5/5 are because this was just reading. There was not much for visuals or effects. But I still liked it.

The only thing I can think of suggesting for an improvment would be: what do you think about reviewers that comment on another persons review? Whether they be answering a previous revewer's question, or bashing them because they disagree with the other person.

I hope I've been helpful.

Score: 4

"Good graphics, but..."

submission: Numa Numa Hentai II

date: September 5, 2008

The beginning portion was the best. After that, there is a serious lack of motion in the animation; just didn't feel real.